It is not just your client set. Leading with the loss tree and relegating exceedance to the summary table is where most of the independent engineers I work with have ended up, for a reason that is more structural than stylistic: P50 and P90 are outputs of the assumptions, so presenting them first invites the reader to interrogate a number whose derivation they have not seen yet. Leading with the itemised losses means the exceedance figures arrive as a consequence of things the reader has already accepted or challenged, and the conversation is much shorter.
The one thing I would keep prominent is the uncertainty breakdown behind P90, separated into interannual variability and model or measurement uncertainty. Those two behave completely differently in a financing context — interannual variability diversifies across a portfolio and across the loan tenor, model uncertainty does not — and a single combined standard deviation hides that. Lenders who are paying attention ask for the split, and providing it unprompted is the single change that has reduced query rounds most in my reports.
