Shortening it did not work because length was never the problem — the problem is that at kickoff the client has no question the memo answers. People read documents that resolve something they are currently uncertain about, and at kickoff the client is certain, wrongly, that everyone agrees. The format change that has worked for me is to stop delivering it as a document to read and start delivering it as a set of decisions to confirm. Same content, but every assumption is written as a statement requiring a yes, with a named owner and a date, and the ones that carry cost or schedule consequences are flagged as such.
In practice that means about eight to twelve confirmation lines at the front, each one phrased so that agreeing to it is a real act — we are designing to this standard, the client is providing this survey by this date, this scope is excluded, this jurisdiction governs. They get read because they need a response, and the prose behind them becomes reference material that nobody has to read at kickoff. The dispute value is unchanged and the up-front engagement goes from near zero to most of the material points being actively confirmed.
